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Golden Rays of Light by JulieMcGuinness

                          You were walking the streets of Italy.You were admiring the colors of the sunset.You were currently in a park.Sitting agaist a weeping willow tree,reading a chapter book.Couples of romance were all around you,making you a little bit jealous of how the girls have someone to love them.The smells of pasta was all around you making you a slight hungrier,but you didn't carry any money.Your step family never cared if you were growing with hunger.They would give you scraps of food,that they didn't want any more.You never went to school.You never even had friends.Only the book that you contained.The book that you contained was a mystery/romance/action and gore. Wierd thing is your real mother had given you this book when you were a baby,when she died.She said it had some explanations that you would find out your true identity.Your dad married a women with silky long black hair,she had 2 presents with her.Guess what that was?Yup,two daughters the same age as you.The names of these two brats was Sophia and Anna.They were destined twins for making your life miserable.Your 'Stepmother' killed your dad robbing him of his money.Soon after that the woman you had to call 'Stepmother' married a greedy man who wanted nothing more than his wife's money.They would host balls that you weren't invited to.Your sisters started calling you Cinderella,because you were the maid and you wore drags for clothes.The twins would make it hard as possible for you.You heard some whistling next to your tree.You looked up to see a teenager boy about your age,he had brownish/hazel hair along with a curl facing --> that way and prince clothes along with deep brown eyes.
"May I help you sir?"You questioned,closing your book.
"Ah,yes I was wondering if you wanted to be my friend?"The boy said.
"You want me to be your friend!?"You asked,getting excited over nothing compared to someone else.
"Yes,you seem pretty enough,and by the way my name is Felicino,Felicino Vargas.
You didn't want to be friends with this guy.If looks are all that matter to him he could go find another 'friend'.
"I'm terribly sorry,I don't think we would be great friends.You see I don't think i'm pretty enough."You said straight out.
"Oh did I hurt your feelings? I'm sorry Mi Bella,please forgive me..."Felicino aplogized,getting on his knees.
"Oh, I forgive you,but I will meet you tommorow ,I must be getting home now, bye Felicino,'till we meet again."You responded,he gave you a quick hug then you left.You smiled to yourself.'First friend?Feels nice to say ^-^.'You thought flashing your first smile at the sky.
What you didn't know was your step sisters stalking you silently through a bush.
"Well,she shouldn't be with the prince!We should we are higher class after all!"Sophia said.
"Well,maybe would could make a ball,invite the prince,and ask him?"Anna said sheepishly.
"Well,maybe you shouldn't be hiding in my bush!!!"A boy said,with lazy red eyed and white snowy hair.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Both of the girls screamed,and ran away.
They found a new bush to hide in 
"Man who was that guy!He should know we are high class."Anna screamed/wispered.
"This is MY bush TOO!!"The boy said,getting mad with the girls.
"Go home already!Your bad company!"The boy said again,getting slietly madder.
The two girls got REEEAAALLLYYY scared,and ran all the way home.
"Daddy we need to tell you something"Sophia cooed to her father.
This will be continued
The picture above is where you were sitting at.
THE PICTURE IS NOT MINE,HETALIA IS NOT MINE EITHER.
It's up to you if you want new characters in it/and if you want to faveriote this or comment.
IT KEEPS GOING TO MY JOURNAL AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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idclolz Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
I'm kinda surprised Prussia didn't say he was awesome... But whatevvs he's still awesome ^3^
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8anime8chick8 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
OF COURSE HE IZ!! XD
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idclolz Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Prussia is like my 2nd favorite country maybe 3rd... Idk anymore but I like Canada and Romano too... And America XD I have too many favorites XD
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8anime8chick8 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOL So do I XD
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idclolz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013
Yeah its a curse... ^3^
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8anime8chick8 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^w^
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idclolz Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013
-sigh- life is difficult xC
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8anime8chick8 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed :/
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foodismyfriend-me Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
PRUSSIA <3
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8anime8chick8 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
X3
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